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William  Marsh's avatar

14 lines with 5 rhymes and none sounding forced! The angels are angels of addiction and an infinite number fit fit on the point of a syringe. Never the less one angel expands and transforms into a predatory bird. That is the 1st 5 lines. Then the love enters - an angel or a predatory bird? Ambiguously both: anticipating need, stimulating the mind, soothing the heart - but doing so like a drug which risks withdrawal or death - but which is two bright and beautiful to give up! This is a rich poem.

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Nick Chapman-Jones's avatar

Really like the exploration of the topic, and the flow fits. Thanks for sharing.

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