The Signal
A Versified Apocalypse about a Traffic Light
Forgive the introductory note. Below is a narrative poem in blank verse. It is not long enough to be published in separate installments (after the style of the venerable
), yet it is perhaps too long for those better tuned to the lyric. My expectations for sustained attention are therefore diminished. My love for you, however, is not. I hope it will entertain, but receive it as you may. I will add further remarks at the end for those who enjoy a little context or commentary.The Signal I The Signal stands—a silent prophetess accustomed now to inattentive eyes, invisibly ensconced in the neglect paid prior-use by dry pragmatic minds, whence uselessness is damned (and whence derived). The intersection—O, that cross we bore before direction ceased to interest us— persists in accidental imagery still nagging like forgotten thoughts. One street is now defunct; we call it Barren Way, and bare it is: across no traffic dares to interfere with progress up or down the perpendicular, Relentless Road. Some time ago (we hear) our fathers turned; to what effect we cannot say, but still the relic speaks of patterns from the past, such habits as divergence. And in fact, our modern archeology reveals an even more complex, preceding sort of signal, fit with lights of red and green (as well as yellow) suited severally to precepts obsolete, whereas our own, the heir, retains but one: the yellow light. What else but yield? Years have blithely passed without the slightest impulse otherwise. To yield is not to stop nor even slow, but just to heed the right to go. With speed we thus converge upon our current plight: Our sun, our yellow herald, our delight, accumulates a dim and reddish hue. Accordingly, our scientists reflect, some course of action must be ascertained by a committee—formed, they recommend, with great expedience. Elections come; elections go, not one without a call for urgent action. Acting urgently at last the voters pick their candidates and action comes. “We must maintain our power,” appointed personnel pronounce one day. (Several weeks had passed in stale debate after some had favorably portrayed the possibility of acclimation to total darkness.) Energy, no less, “must be conserved”; thus physics’ modest law of conservation suffers modal flair. The edict stirs the folds, enflamed by fear, and shepherds poised in studied nonchalance corral the conscientious citizens in pens of palliative sacrifice. So minor inconvenience spreads relief among the faithful pharisaical, and others fall in line. Flip down that switch and think of all the money that you’ll save, enough to cushion your impending fall into the grave—or so the jingle goes, played hourly upon the radio; amusing irony, we all believe. II With signs and slogans, songs and simple steps we ease our guilty minds beside the still, reflective surface of the Stream of Self- Assurance (measurement of our success is left, at best, a question). Yet despite the guarantees, the tide of energy does not recede (some revenues increase), and leaders meet to face the catered meal of compromise. At length they so resolve: “We must maintain our power. Yes, the sun resists our legislation, yet we must survey the ways in which our services unduly drain the stores that we should save.” Unanimous, they acquiesce. The votes are cast; the motion passes; hope endures no less that trends reflect that second law which, since the first transgression, holds its sway and never bears transgressing. In the end, the well-conceived is scarcely well-achieved: Evaluations done, departments deem the dutiful austerity applies to functions less essential than their own. They reconvene, resenting now the time and inconvenience spent to entertain impractical restraint. Ashamed to shy from public measures, leaders contemplate alternatives ostensibly severe. Their straining sights alighting finally upon the Signal, they decide to stop its operation for the good of all. There are, of course, objections to the act, most of which the elderly propound. They claim history and tradition warrant some consideration for its place. In diplomatic fashion, the elect assure us that the Signal will remain a cherished point of interest for the town, attractively displayed (donations made are tax deductible) and duly praised in a brochure for visitors. Allayed, misgivings fade, and all prepare their hearts to celebrate the designated day: “The Great Unplugging,” formally decreed— festivities to follow, which include a unified, commemorative commute. III Arranged in haste, the sacred day arrives; the ceremony’s quickly underway. A happy mantra rises from the crowd: Maintain our power!—a phrase now well ingrained upon the hearts and bumpers of our town. Maintain, Maintain our power! Maintain our power! A hand beside the plug awaits the cue from one that signs above a podium. Now speech like moisture gathers in the air, now swirling, now descending as a fog while fingertips unconsciously caress their keys like rosaries. The word, the hand, the cry across the land—Maintain our power! and then the clamor as the cars are filled with every able body, every ear now filled with cheers and corresponding roars from ready engines. Then the blast resounds the last explosive “Go!” Relentless flows with traffic, slowly first, then steadily beneath the banners stamped iconically in green with jagged bolts and trees (the leaves like cash), and happily the drivers note the freedom, the enthralling liberty diffused by crossing Barren’s faded way without a signal. Vehicles advance along the road—the smiles enclosed within refracted through distorted shapes by glass reflecting, as they pass, the circumstance— when, on the walk the cord still loosely cast in idle distance from its former source, the Signal suddenly reactivates. It flashes, slowly first, then steadily in yellow, amber, orange, and lastly red. A man employed in solitary watch, bewildered, fears some fault to be his own, and draws with frantic hands his firearm, demolishes the bulb, then disappears, escaping to the emptiness around with his embarrassed face. The drivers, dazed a twinkling instant, barely check their pace before dismissing the phenomenon as one of those inconsequential flukes attendant on technology—its realm of gnostic cant as prone to casual blame as government affairs. The unity continues both in mind and course. Unseen a fissure forms down Barren Way, a split unwittingly the wheels kiss in turn. Now sound of sounds, immense as silence, rends the sky, precipitately widening the nascent crack into a vast abyss. The world appears to fold upon itself while vehicles of all designs collide and pour into the thirsty gulf, where blood and oil mix with fire as numerous explosions indiscriminately toss the parts of cars and bodies in the air. Some forward, others backward sliding fall, deficient fare to fill so ravenous a canyon, guzzling with grim dispatch. Not one can halt despite pervasive red imploring stupid feet to find the brake; too tardily they reach, as earth recedes to rush the wreckage through the crushing din. The table rudely cleared, the banquet done, across the vacant road reverberates a final belch. Upon its lonesome perch, the Signal quakes. The sun explodes.
The end. I first wrote this as a short story back in the early aughts, but it included much of the rhythm and assonance I retained here. When I shared it with a group of artists in San Diego county (called The Art Mafia), one belovéd member said it reminded her of a kind of a morbid Dr. Seuss. I took it as a compliment. A few years later, a literary and pedagogical mentor of mine recommended that I practice some blank verse to grow as a poet, and I decided to convert the story into a narrative poem. Since then I have revised it many times. I’ve been reluctant to impose longer works on my patient audience, but I figure if Robert can confidently share his extended epic about trees, then my weird little cataclysm is in good company.
The story is set in a world conceptually adjacent to ours, if not exact, and the physics don’t really work for our galaxy—though the supernatural element hopefully precludes any nitpicking on that score. (God can do what He wants.) The impetus of for story also came largely before the “climate change” hysteria had reached its climax, but there is “nothing new under the sun” (to borrow an apt phrase) and any cause du jour might have served as the background for the more important exploration of human motives, the manipulation of fear, willful blindness, etc. Indeed to reduce the purport to a given political stance is to miss the whale for its barnacles, so to speak. Hopefully the whimsy does not hamper its potential for insight, but in the end I’d rather it fail at being profound than fail at being fun. Thank you for reading!




It is, as Peter said, dense. I've read it three times, and I still have a tough time following the plot. I think maybe the issue is with the narrator, who is a character in the story, a member of the community, but I'm unclear about his attitude toward events. There's layers of intellect and irony to peel back to get to it. This is by design, I think. The story is about ideas and not necessarily people, and the ideas are maybe over my head. I'm missing a skeleton key.
But that said, there are so many great turns of phrase, so many verses that sound Swiftian or Popean (I think I've called you Augustan before). Maybe the satirical tone also makes me think of them. The rhythm is propulsive, and the occasional rhymes are energetic and keep you reading.
Great lines like "Now speech like moisture gathers in the air" and "The intersection—O, that cross we bore / before direction ceased to interest us—" and, what I think is the theme of the poem,
"To yield is not to stop nor even slow,
but just to heed the right to go."
A pleasure to puzzle over your work.
Narrative poetry on Substack is likely the saving grace of 2025, so thank you for adding to the conversation! This is a lot of fun: tonal consistency, cognitive originality, satisfying irony. I felt like I missed a stanza because while I fully expected the supposedly obsolete traffic signal to turn out to be essential, I couldn't trace how it triggered an apocalyptic event. I went back and read the beginning of the poem to see what I had missed. Then I realized that maybe this wasn't supposed to be a folktale about one small town but a global symbol. So not just one traffic signal but all are down ? Traffic signals are no longer important because people are no longer driving? People are flying? Ultimately I wasn't able to sleuth my way to the ending. My favorite bits are the politicians doing everything to stay in power: "We must maintain our power. Yes, the sun / resists our legislation, yet we must / survey the ways in which our services / unduly drain the stores that we should save.” The fact that they are speaking to the issue means this isn't a solitary traffic signal but an important symbol. The sun is complicit! But how?