A Bit of Blank Verse
"where entropy, like accident, designs
a quiet, more compliant congregant."
You, sir, are quite the craftsman. Bravo!
Much appreciated!
Both the language and the storytelling here are great! It reads beautifully.
Great language!
Inspiring in its imagery.
Love the transition in the end from observation to context:
"Among the wreckage, dawdling unseen
where mammals chew their mediocre cud,
a stubborn Adam burnishes the name
embossed upon a retroreflective sign
to mark his scrapheap garden Somewhere still."
Thank you James.
"where entropy, like accident, designs
a quiet, more compliant congregant."
You, sir, are quite the craftsman. Bravo!
Much appreciated!
Both the language and the storytelling here are great! It reads beautifully.
Great language!
Inspiring in its imagery.
Love the transition in the end from observation to context:
"Among the wreckage, dawdling unseen
where mammals chew their mediocre cud,
a stubborn Adam burnishes the name
embossed upon a retroreflective sign
to mark his scrapheap garden Somewhere still."
Thank you James.